Today we arrived to Grand Coulee Dam. It is in the state of Washington. The dam forms Lake Franklin D. Roosevelt. It is 168 metres and 1,592 metres long!!!It is gigantic!!!!It is incredible how they could construct something so big in 1967.......In the picture / seemed that i smiling, but my butt hurts alot!!!!, because we were / 6 hours bicycling.
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