We are a later stage of Northern Tier Route and staying in Glacier National Park in the north of Montana today. This is known as a gigantic area which has a lot of mountains, lakes, plants, and animals. If it is sunny, you can see a captivating and expansive terrain. Especially the evening scene is beyond description. While watching these scenes, it feels like everything is tiny and I can forget about negative issues. Actually I got a flat tire just after starting touring today, but it was a wicked bitty problem. But it also makes me sentimental and reminds me of my girlfriend in North Dakota. Is she really doing well? I'd love to see her ASAP!
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